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I want to wish everyone a Happy Thanksgiving, well unless you aren’t American then I wish you a happy day.

I have so much to be thankful for I couldn’t possible list them here. Since this is a writing blog I will narrow it done to one area, the book.

I am so thankful to be able to hold my book in my hand and to see my name on the cover.

To get to this point, I want to thank…

Michelle L Devon for holding contests on Accentuate Services and publishing the book. She took time away from her own writing to help other writers have the honor of saying they are published. Thank you Michy!

Susan Sosbe for being a very dear friend and beta reader to everything I write. She helped edit my story and has always supported me whatever my decision. I love you, Susan!

Jennifer Walker, Steven Thor Gunnin, Lindsay Maddox, Laurie Darroch-Meekis, Lucinda Gunnin, Angel Sharum, Jo Brielyn, George Kramer, M. Lori Motley, Susan Sosbe(yes again), Felicity Tillack and Randy Barefoot. Who are these people? They are the co-authors in the anthology. I am honored to be included in a book with such talented people.

My friends and family both online and in real life who supported me, guided me, listened to me complain and entertained me when I needed it.

And last but not least, you faithful readers. Thank you for taking time out of your busy days to read my words. You honor me.

Happy Thanksgiving everyone!

PS… be sure to leave a comment on the blog post here to enter to win an autographed copy of the book Elements of the Soul.

about 60,000 or so.

At least if the old publishing stand by of 250 words per page is correct. Wondering what I am babbling on about? Check out the pic of me holding my very own copy of Elements of the Soul. As you can see I am delighted to hold the book with my short story in it in my hot little hand. If you look very closely you will see my name on the cover.

What, can’t see it? You may just have to look at the actual book to notice it. To that end- I am giving away an autographed copy to a lucky reader. To enter, comment on this post. Be sure to leave an email address if I can’t find you by clicking on your name- or if you are loathe to leave it. I will announce it on the blog on December 8th and will ask the winner to email me.

Bonus entries if you blog, twitter or link on facebook about the contest. Please include links with your comment. If you absolutely can’t wait to have one, you can purchase one now on Amazon or email me and I will sell you an autographed copy for $11 plus shipping.

Sorry.  This is why I didn’t do NaNoWriMo this year. I chug along pretty good but if I hit a bump- like getting sick and not posting for a few days- I tend to wander off and do other things rather than getting back on the horse.

While I don’t plan on the everyday post thing anymore, I do want to post frequently.

I am in productive state of mind. I haven’t been writing any articles in a while. Instead I focused on the book. Once the book was written, I am not sure what I did. :)

I plan on writing articles every day again. Need money for Christmas and to pay the bills. But I still want to stay on target for the novel. I need to keep editing so I can submit to an agent.

Discipline is what I need. I wonder if I can rent a severe looking nun to crack a ruler over my knuckles when I goof off like I am in Catholic school? I wouldn’t wear the plaid skirt though. My uniform tends to be grubby shorts during the day. The scary thing is I probably could hire someone to do that and there is probably some clubs devoted to ruler wielding severe nuns. So not googling it!

Happy Monday everyone! I hope you have a happy and productive day.

I have read some very good books lately.  Since I have been sick I have been sleeping a lot and reading a lot. The husband picked out some very good books for me from the library.

One series is The Mortal Instruments by Cassandra Clare. How did I miss these little gems? I finished reading City of Bones and devoured City of Ash. Now I need to get City of Glass and the next is due out in March. I love books like this. It is YA urban fantasy at it’s best. It’s clever, with some romance and kick butt fantasy elements. These are the books I want to write.

This is what I hope someday someone will feel like when they read my book.

What good books have you read lately?

I’m sorry I am unable to get to this blog right now, please leave a message after the beep, and I will get back to you as soon as I can.

Okay, that was the only humor I could come up with right now. I have been sick the last few days. Yesterday woke up feeling like poo. I managed to get online a teeny bit. Today I woke up feeling like poo with a pounding headache. I got online to email the hubby who is working a half day today to tell him to get this Thai beef noodle soup I like when I am sick. It’s my comfort food.

So, sorry no pearls of wisdom today. Just a lot of whining. Hopefully I will be back and ready to go tomorrow- especialy since these characters won’t get out of my head and let me rest.

What a wonderful day. There were some great words today. The best were from my five-year-old son who asked, “Mom, do we have princesses in our country?” I told him no. His response, “Well, you are my princess, mommy.” Melt.

He is so getting a new bike for Christmas!

The other lovely words were the rewrite I did for the novel.  I have a fight scene right at the beginning where the two main characters meet for the first time. In my mind the fight was a means to an end- to get them together. Apparently that came across in my writing.

I had several readers say there wasn’t enough detail, etc. I realized something important- the fight scene wasn’t a big deal to me, the writer. However, the fight scene was very important to the characters, we’re talking life or death. So it is important to the reader.

I rewrote the thing and ended up with something I really like. I was also able to develop the characters more because I decided to add things in during the fight.  Now I have a fight worthy of being in my first ten pages.  woo hoo!

I am so happy I listened to my beta readers and fixed it.

Now I am off to polish my tiara and a few more edits while my royal subject is asleep in his bed.

Target has the Lexmark X5650 4 in 1 printer on sale for $39.  I have been wanting a fax/scanner/printer combo for the “office” for a while now. A few weeks ago our old printer ran out of ink. Man, those ink cartridges are expensive! I was able to buy this whole new printer which includes ink for less than the refills for my Canon printer. Crazy.

I heard I can refill ink for this printer at Walgreens for $10 so that makes me happy.

I can’t wait to finish editing the next few chapters so I can print them out to bring to the next critique group meeting.

I have been twitching with ideas but haven’t been able to work very much on the book at all this weekend. I am probably the only person on the planet looking forward to Monday because the kid goes to school and the hubby to work and I get to write. woo hoo! Come on Monday.

I have found a critique group I can go to in person. Previously all my critiques have been online. The feedback is different when it is face to face. There is less BS and I can ask questions about things that I don’t understand. I love it.

I had a meeting today and brought the first two chapters of my baby to be reviewed. When eight people all say the same thing about a part you know they are right. One person saying it you can write off by thinking they just don’t get it.

But when more than one person doesn’t get it- that means you as a writer have failed. Which means it is time to rewrite.

There was one person in our group who was upset after her review. She said she had received a lot of criticism. She didn’t really. Several people were gushing about how poetic her work was but she only heard the negatives. I wonder if she will ever come back.

I guess I have a thicker skin. I want to hear all the bad. Throw it at me! Why? Because it means I can fix it and make my novel even stronger. I want the best of the best when I submit to agents.

I am in this for the long haul. I have a goal in mind- to get my book published and to have readers love it. So even if it means chopping a funny scene that I love because it doesn’t work in the flow- I am doing it. I have no problems hacking down the rosebush if it means I will end up with a beautiful rose at the end.

So my suggestion to you is find a local writing group and join. Not only did I get good feedback, I was itching to write when I got home. Heck I was hoping for a red stoplight on the drive home so I could write down ideas that popped into my head.

Critique groups are good! Go find one today.

I was going to blow off posting today. It’s been a long week. Veterans day the kid was home. He ended up getting sick so he stayed home today and now, since he is still sporting a low-grade fever no school tomorrow.

The problem with my 5 year-old son is he is full of energy. I think once, maybe twice he has been so sick he sat on the couch quietly and watched TV. Otherwise he is ready to run around, chase the dog, ride his bike etc. But he can’t because it makes him cough. He is cranky from being sick so it usually ends up with me screaming “Stop running” by the end of the day and him screaming back, “No”- it’s exhausting for both of us.

I remember after he had his tonsils out they told me he would be out of it for the rest of the day and to keep him quiet. HA! He woke up an hour after he got home and literally (yes, I mean the correct usage of literally) jumped off the couch and ran to the freezer for popsicles. He ate one after enough and we spent the rest of the time trying to get him to stop running.

So not much of a post today. sorry. I need to conserve my energy for tomorrow. :)

People who serve in the armed forces deserve respect and thanks.  I want to say thank you for your sacrifices for our country.

But I also want to thank a big group that is usually forgotten in the pomp and circumstance surrounding Veterans Day.

Thank you to the family members left behind. It is a horrible thing to watch your loved one go off to serve. Even if there isn’t a war, being a military family means knowing at any moment, your loved one can get called away.

I was a Marine wife during Desert Storm. My husband (ex now) didn’t have to go- but for a month we were told every day, tomorrow you are probably shipping out, be prepared. There were many tearful nights and mornings watching him go to work wondering if today was the day. It’s a hard life.

Thank you for your sacrifices military families for giving up anniversaries, birthdays and holidays while worrying about the one you love being in harms way. You are the unsung heroes that enable our military to go and do the job which keeps us safe.

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